Very nice work, keep it up lm waiting for your next work.

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Back and in white.

i like this one very good.

very emotional court.. wonderful work, albeit saddening

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Kel Adam

That was beautiful.

I really understand what you're saying..
It sorta reminds me of me. I don't tell people anything, and it ends up eating me. I cant share anything personal, so im always left alone to tackle my problems.

but seriously.. Sometimes there isn't time to think about it, you just need to jump.
There really isn't any point in weighing yourself down with imaginary possibilities. You lose sight of what's real

How do you know that you will never catch up
if you never run?

...I wonder if a misinterperated this whole poem...

It was fantastic.. total favorite..

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A true friend stabs you in the front.

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By what i am going to say next i do not mean any offense. As a person who always found it easy to share my personal problems, I find people who cannot immensley frustrating. I always felt it even offensive that they could not trust me to share anything - and that they would not let me get to know their real self.

The fact that all my "friends" live behind closed doors means that I have never been able to understand them, to know them, and i always found that really sad. It feels as if people used me for some reason - they obvoiusly valued something about me and took all they could - but were never willing to give a peice of themselves in return.

I believe the majority of humans around us to be kind and caring. They care for you - even if it does not appear like that on the surface. Most people are always ready to listen: And i think that if the first initial step is taken in letting someone else have a part of you, a beautiful bridge can be created that takes only hell itself to break down.

These are my thoughts.

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Jesus came from outerspace and he travelled from beyond the stars - he came down for peace on earth and he left in a second hand car.

just before, i had this nice and relatively long note to put on here, and then my browser chucked a spaz and closed. damnit. i think it was along the lines of...

while this piece was written a while ago, i think that some of it is still relevant. like the not-letting-people-in-on-you part, unfortunately. i agree with what ~phewd said, about that initial step, too. also, even though one person turned their back on you / ran away, it doesn't mean that everyone else will. there are people/friends who would love to listen to you, and who care a lot about you, maybe more than they can get across or communicate. so don't give up and think you have to stay bottled away because you sure as anything don't, and probably shouldn't.


alright well that wasn't exactly what i said before, and it doesn't sound nearly as good as it did before.

and all of those other hugging/caring emoticons (but nonetheless strange looking)

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